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Mosonújhely, Hungary
Image size
2329x3533px 3.97 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 1000D
Shutter Speed
1/395 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
300 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
May 22, 2011, 7:43:26 PM
Sensor Size
13mm
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I love the flow of the work, the color contrasts are beautiful, as well. The only improvement that I could think of, is cropping the image a bit higher. The eye is entering from the bottom, doing a fun little S, then it hits the impact of the "pyramid".... but the pyramid is a big arrow pointing up, especially with the apex nearly touching the top (creating tension), pushing my eyes out of the image. This image could benefit A LOT from a tiny bit of negative space of the sky. Keep up the great work! You have a great way of playing with the eye movement!